์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•  ๋•Œ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋ง ๊บผ๋‚ด๋Š” ๋ฒ•

์ด๋ฏธ์ง€
์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•  ๋•Œ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋ง์„ ๊บผ๋‚ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ๋ณด๋‹ค ์–ด๋ ต๊ฒŒ ๋А๊ปด์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ ๋ฌธํ™”์  ์ฐจ์ด๋‚˜ ํ‘œํ˜„ ๋ฐฉ์‹์ด ๋‹ฌ๋ผ ๋ง‰๋ง‰ํ•  ๋•Œ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์ฃ . ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ถ€๋‹ด ์—†์ด ์นœ๊ทผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”? ์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•  ๋•Œ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋ง ๊บผ๋‚ด๋Š” ๋ฒ• ์„ ์ตํžˆ๋ฉด ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์š”์•ฝ 1: ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์นœ๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค๊ฐ€๊ฐˆ ๋•Œ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ณ  ๋ถ€๋‹ด ์—†๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„๋ฒ•์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์š”์•ฝ 2: ์ƒํ™ฉ๋ณ„ ๋งž์ถคํ˜• ๋ฌธ์žฅ๊ณผ ๋Œ€ํ™” ์‹œ์ž‘๋ฒ•์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์‹ค์ „ ํ™œ์šฉ๋„๋ฅผ ๋†’์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•ต์‹ฌ ์š”์•ฝ 3: ๋ฌธํ™”์  ๋ฐฐ๊ฒฝ๊ณผ ์–ธ์–ด ๊ฐ๊ฐ์„ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•œ ์กฐ์–ธ์œผ๋กœ ์˜คํ•ด ์—†์ด ์†Œํ†ตํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•ˆ๋‚ดํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 1. ์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•  ๋•Œ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋Œ€ํ™” ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฒ•๊ณผ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ํ‘œํ˜„ 1) ๋ถ€๋‹ด ์—†๊ณ  ์นœ๊ทผํ•œ ์˜์–ด ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง๊ณผ ๊ด€์‹ฌ ํ‘œํ˜„ ์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•  ๋•Œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ถ€๋‹ด์„ ์ฃผ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์ธ์‚ฌ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ด์—์„œ๋Š” “Hi, how’s it going?”์ด๋‚˜ “Hey, what’s up?” ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง์ด ์นœ๊ทผํ•จ์„ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์€ ์ •์ค‘ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ๋„ ๊ฐ€๋ฒผ์›Œ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์ด ํŽธ์•ˆํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋А๋ผ๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํŠนํžˆ ์ฒ˜์Œ ๋งŒ๋‚˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋‚˜ ์–ด์ƒ‰ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์ ๊ทน ์ถ”์ฒœ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 2) ๊ณตํ†ต ๊ด€์‹ฌ์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋Œ€ํ™”์˜ ๋ฌผ๊ผฌ ํŠธ๊ธฐ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”! ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์ด์–ด๊ฐ€๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์ƒ๋Œ€์™€์˜ ๊ณตํ†ต ๊ด€์‹ฌ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด “I noticed you like music. What’s your favorite band?” ๊ฐ™์€ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ํ™•์žฅ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ ‘๊ทผ๋ฒ•์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์ด ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜์—ฌ ์นœ๋ฐ€๊ฐ์„ ํ˜•์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 3) ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ๋ถ€ํƒ์ด๋‚˜ ์ œ์•ˆ์œผ๋กœ ์นœ๋ฐ€๊ฐ ์Œ“๊ธฐ “Do you want to grab a coffee sometime?” ํ˜น์€ “Would you like to join us for lunch?” ๊ฐ™์€ ์ œ์•ˆ์€ ์นœ๊ตฌ๋กœ ๋ฐœ์ „ํ•  ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์„ฑ์„ ๋†’์ž…...

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™” ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š”

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™” ์ฃผ์ œ๋Š”

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค์˜ ์„ฑ๊ณต์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™” ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ๊ณ  ๊ณ„์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”? ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋งŽ์€ ๋ถ„๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”๋ฅผ ์–ด๋ ค์›Œํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ๊ธ€์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„๊ณผ ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1. ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ฏธํŒ…์—์„œ์˜ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ฏธํŒ…์€ ํšŒ์‚ฌ์˜ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์˜์‚ฌ์†Œํ†ต ๊ณต๊ฐ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋•Œ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1) ํšŒ์˜ ์‹œ์ž‘๊ณผ ์†Œ๊ฐœ

ํšŒ์˜๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ๋•Œ์˜ ์ธ์‚ฌ์™€ ์†Œ๊ฐœ๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "Thank you all for being here today."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ฐธ์„์ž๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ์‚ฌ์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ์„ ์ „ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ์ฐธ์„์ž๋“ค์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "I’d like to introduce..."๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ด์–ด๊ฐˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ํšŒ์˜์˜ ๋ถ„์œ„๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ถ€๋“œ๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๊ณ , ์ฐธ์—ฌ์ž ๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋ˆ๋…ํžˆ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2) ์˜๊ฒฌ ์ œ์‹œ์™€ ๋ฐ˜์‘

ํšŒ์˜ ์ค‘ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "In my opinion..." ๋˜๋Š” "I believe that..."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํžˆ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ฐธ์„์ž๋“ค๋„ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋„๋ก ์œ ๋„ํ•˜๋Š” ํšจ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํšŒ์˜๊ฐ€ ์›ํ™œํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ง„ํ–‰๋˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•˜๋ฏ€๋กœ, ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) ํšŒ์˜ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ์™€ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ

ํšŒ์˜๋ฅผ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "To summarize..." ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ์ฃผ์š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ์ฐธ์„์ž๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค์Œ ํšŒ์˜๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "I’d appreciate your feedback on this matter."๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์š”์ฒญํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ ์‹œ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์—์„œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์€ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ ์ธ ์†Œํ†ต ์ˆ˜๋‹จ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1) ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์‹œ์ž‘๊ณผ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ง

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "Dear [Name],"๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋•Œ, ์ˆ˜์‹ ์ž์˜ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ํ„ฐ์น˜๋ฅผ ๋”ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "I hope this email finds you well."๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ฐฐ๋ ค๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋ฉฐ, ์นœ๊ทผํ•œ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2) ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ๋‚ด์šฉ ์ „๋‹ฌ

์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "I am writing to inform you..." ๋˜๋Š” "I would like to discuss..."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์‚ฌํ•ญ์€ ๋ชฉ๋ก ํ˜•์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ฐ€๋…์„ฑ์„ ๋†’์ด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ์™€ ์š”์ฒญ

์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "Thank you for your attention." ๋˜๋Š” "Looking forward to your reply."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์˜ ๋ฐ˜์‘์„ ๊ธฐ๋Œ€ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์— "Best regards," ๋˜๋Š” "Sincerely,"๋กœ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋ฉด ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํŠน์ง• ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ฏธํŒ… ์˜์–ด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์˜์–ด
ํ˜•์‹ ๊ตฌ์ˆ ์ , ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ˜• ์„œ๋ฉด, ๊ณต์‹์ 
๋ชฉ์  ์˜์‚ฌ์†Œํ†ต, ์˜๊ฒฌ ๊ตํ™˜ ์ •๋ณด ์ „๋‹ฌ, ์š”์ฒญ
์ฃผ์š” ํ‘œํ˜„ "In my opinion...", "To summarize..." "I am writing to...", "Thank you for your attention."

3. ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํ‚น ์ด๋ฒคํŠธ์—์„œ์˜ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํ‚น์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐฝ์ถœํ•˜๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ณผ์ •์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋•Œ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ํšŒํ™” ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1) ์ž๊ธฐ ์†Œ๊ฐœ์™€ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์‚ฌ ๊ณต์œ 

๋„คํŠธ์›Œํ‚น์—์„œ ์ž์‹ ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "My name is..." ๋˜๋Š” "I work for..."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ดํ›„ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์‚ฌ๋‚˜ ์ „๋ฌธ ๋ถ„์•ผ๋ฅผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ด์–ด์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "I’m particularly interested in..."์ด๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ๊ณผ์˜ ๊ณตํ†ต์ ์„ ์ฐพ๋Š” ๋ฐ๋„ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2) ๋Œ€ํ™” ์ด์–ด๊ฐ€๊ธฐ

์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ๊ณผ์˜ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์ด์–ด๊ฐ€๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "What do you think about...?" ๋˜๋Š” "How did you get started in...?"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๋ณด์ด๋ฉฐ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ํ™œ๋ฐœํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์€ ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํ‚น์˜ ๊ธฐํšŒ๋ฅผ ๋„“ํžˆ๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ์—ญํ• ์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜ ๊ตํ™˜๊ณผ ํ›„์† ๋Œ€ํ™”

๋Œ€ํ™”๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚˜๊ฐˆ ๋ฌด๋ ต์—๋Š” ์—ฐ๋ฝ์ฒ˜๋ฅผ ๊ตํ™˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "Would you like to exchange contacts?"๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ดํ›„ ํ›„์† ๋Œ€ํ™”๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ฐธ๊ณ  ์ž๋ฃŒ๋กœ ํ™œ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "Let’s keep in touch!"๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ๋‚จ๊ธธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4. ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์—์„œ์˜ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ธฐํšŒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1) ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ธฐ

ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "Thank you for your time."๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ์ฒญ์ค‘์—๊ฒŒ ๊ณ ๋งˆ์›€์„ ํ‘œํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ดํ›„ "Today, I’m going to talk about..."๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋กœ ์ฃผ์ œ๋ฅผ ๋ช…ํ™•ํžˆ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋•Œ ์ฒญ์ค‘์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๋Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ์ด๋‚˜ ํ†ต๊ณ„ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ธ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2) ์ฃผ์š” ๋‚ด์šฉ ์ „๋‹ฌ

ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์˜ ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์—์„œ๋Š” "First, let’s look at..."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ์‹œ๊ฐ์  ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋ณด๊ฐ•ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ดํ•ด๋ฅผ ๋•๋Š” ๋ฐ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "As you can see from the chart..."๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ž๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) ์งˆ์˜์‘๋‹ต ๋ฐ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ

ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์ด ๋๋‚œ ํ›„์—๋Š” ์งˆ์˜์‘๋‹ต ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. "Do you have any questions?"๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ์ฒญ์ค‘์˜ ๋ฐ˜์‘์„ ์œ ๋„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ "Thank you for your attention."์œผ๋กœ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜๋ฉด ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ๋‚จ๊ธธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

5. ํ˜‘์ƒ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ์˜ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”

ํ˜‘์ƒ์€ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค์—์„œ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒฐ์ •์ด ์ด๋ฃจ์–ด์ง€๋Š” ์ˆœ๊ฐ„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋•Œ ํ™œ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1) ํ˜‘์ƒ ์‹œ์ž‘๊ณผ ๋ชฉํ‘œ ์„ค์ •

ํ˜‘์ƒ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "Let’s clarify our objectives."๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋ฅผ ๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ๊ณผ์˜ ํ˜‘์ƒ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•œ ์˜์‚ฌ์†Œํ†ต์ด ํ•„์ˆ˜์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ํ•œ ์ค‘์†Œ๊ธฐ์—…์˜ CEO์ธ ๋ฐ•OO ์”จ๋Š” ์ œํ’ˆ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ ํ˜‘์ƒ ์‹œ "We aim to find a win-win solution."๋ผ๊ณ  ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•˜์—ฌ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์˜ ํ˜‘์กฐ๋ฅผ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋ƒˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ˜‘์ƒ ์ดˆ๊ธฐ ๋‹จ๊ณ„์—์„œ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์„ค์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ˜‘์ƒ์˜ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์„ฑ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์„ ์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2) ์ œ์•ˆ ๋ฐ ๋ฐ˜์‘ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๊ธฐ

ํ˜‘์ƒ ์ค‘ ์ œ์•ˆ์„ ํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "I propose that we..."๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ž์‹ ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํžˆ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์˜ ๋ฐ˜์‘์„ ์œ ๋„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ, ๋Œ€๊ธฐ์—…์˜ ๊ตฌ๋งค ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž์ธ ์ดOO ์”จ๋Š” "I propose that we increase the order quantity to reduce costs."๋ผ๊ณ  ์ œ์•ˆํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ์กฐ๊ฑด์„ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋ƒˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ œ์•ˆ์€ ํ˜‘์ƒ์˜ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ด๋ฉฐ, ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ๋ฐ˜์‘์„ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) ํ˜‘์ƒ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ์™€ ํ•ฉ์˜ ๋„์ถœ

ํ˜‘์ƒ์˜ ๋์—์„œ "I believe we’ve reached a mutual agreement."๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ํ•ฉ์˜๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ๊ณ , ํ–ฅํ›„ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์ด์–ด๊ฐ€๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ํ•œ ์Šคํƒ€ํŠธ์—… ๋Œ€ํ‘œ์ธ ๊น€OO ์”จ๋Š” "Thank you for your cooperation; I look forward to our partnership."๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์ข‹์€ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์œ ์ง€ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

6. ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค์™€ ์ง€์›์—์„œ์˜ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”

๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค๋ฅผ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณ ๊ฐ๊ณผ์˜ ์†Œํ†ต์€ ๋ธŒ๋žœ๋“œ ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€์— ํฐ ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

1) ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์ธ์‚ฌ ๋ฐ ๋ฌธ์ œ ํ™•์ธ

๊ณ ๊ฐ์ด ์ „ํ™”๋ฅผ ๊ฑธ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ๋Š” "How can I assist you today?"๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Š” ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์‹ ์†ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ํ•œ ์นดํŽ˜์˜ ์ง์›์ธ ์ตœOO ์”จ๋Š” ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ถˆ๋งŒ์„ ๋“ฃ๊ณ  "I’m sorry to hear that; let’s resolve this issue."๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋ฅผ ์–ป์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ์ •์ค‘ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2) ํ•ด๊ฒฐ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๊ธฐ

๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ™•์ธํ•œ ํ›„์—๋Š” "We can offer you a replacement."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ด๊ณ  ์‹ค์งˆ์ ์ธ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋งŒ์กฑ๋„๋ฅผ ๋†’์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•œ ๋ฆฌํ…Œ์ผ ์ƒ์ ์˜ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž์ธ ํ™OO ์”จ๋Š” "We can provide a full refund if you’re not satisfied."๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค์—์„œ์˜ ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋ฅผ ๊ตฌ์ถ•ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) ์‚ฌํ›„ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์™€ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ ์š”์ฒญ

์„œ๋น„์Šค๊ฐ€ ์™„๋ฃŒ๋œ ํ›„์—๋Š” "Is there anything else I can help you with?"๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์ง€์›์„ ์ œ์•ˆํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ์š”์ฒญํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ํ•œ ์˜จ๋ผ์ธ ์‡ผํ•‘๋ชฐ์˜ ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค ๋‹ด๋‹น์ž ์ •OO ์”จ๋Š” "We value your feedback; it helps us improve our services."๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ์ ๊ทน์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฐ˜์˜ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Š” ๊ณ ๊ฐ๊ณผ์˜ ์ง€์†์ ์ธ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ƒํ™ฉ ํ˜‘์ƒ ์˜์–ด ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค ์˜์–ด
ํ˜•์‹ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ˜•, ๋ชฉ์  ์ง€ํ–ฅ์  ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ˜•, ๋ฌธ์ œ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ ์ง€ํ–ฅ์ 
๋ชฉ์  ํ•ฉ์˜ ๋„์ถœ, ์ด์ต ์กฐ์ • ๊ณ ๊ฐ ๋งŒ์กฑ, ๋ฌธ์ œ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ
์ฃผ์š” ํ‘œํ˜„ "I propose that we...", "Let’s clarify our objectives." "How can I assist you?", "Is there anything else I can help you with?"

๊ฒฐ๋ก 

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ์ˆ˜์ค€์˜ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”๋Š” ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์ธ ์˜์‚ฌ์†Œํ†ต์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ํ•„์ˆ˜์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ณธ ๊ธ€์—์„œ๋Š” ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ฏธํŒ…, ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ, ๋„คํŠธ์›Œํ‚น, ํ”„๋ ˆ์  ํ…Œ์ด์…˜, ํ˜‘์ƒ ๋ฐ ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค ๋“ฑ์˜ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๋‹ค๋ฃจ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์€ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ๊ณผ์˜ ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๊ฐ•ํ™”ํ•˜๊ณ  ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ์†Œํ†ต์„ ๋„์™€์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๊ฑธ๋ฆฌ์ง€๋งŒ, ๊พธ์ค€ํ•œ ์—ฐ์Šต๊ณผ ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ์ž๋ฃŒ ํ™œ์šฉ์ด ๋’ท๋ฐ›์นจ๋œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ์ ์„ ์žŠ์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.

์š”์•ฝํ•˜์ž๋ฉด, ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™”์—์„œ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์ตํžˆ๊ณ  ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์˜์‚ฌ์†Œํ†ต์˜ ์งˆ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ค๋ฉฐ, ์ด๋Š” ๊ณง ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์ธ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๊ด€๊ณ„๋กœ ์ด์–ด์งˆ ๊ฒƒ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ์˜์–ดํšŒํ™” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์„ ํ‚ค์šฐ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์˜ค๋Š˜๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์˜์–ด ํšŒํ™” ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!

FAQ: ์ž์ฃผํ•˜๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ

1) Q: ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ฏธํŒ…์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ถ”์ฒœ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ฏธํŒ…์—์„œ๋Š” "Thank you for joining us today."๋กœ ๊ฐ์‚ฌ์˜ ์ธ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ „ํ•˜๊ณ , ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "In my opinion..."์„ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํšŒ์˜ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ์‹œ์—๋Š” "To summarize..."๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ด์ฃผ๋ฉด ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์€ ํšŒ์˜์˜ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋งค๋„๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2) Q: ์ดˆ๋ณด์ž์—๊ฒŒ ์ถ”์ฒœํ•˜๋Š” ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ด์ฑ…์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?

์ดˆ๋ณด์ž์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” "Business English for Dummies"๋ฅผ ์ถ”์ฒœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ์ฑ…์€ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์šฉ์–ด์™€ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ณ , ์‹ค์ƒํ™œ ์˜ˆ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ดํ•ด๋ฅผ ๋„์™€์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ๋Œ€๋Š” ์•ฝ 20,000~30,000์›์œผ๋กœ ์ ‘๊ทผํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋˜ํ•œ, ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์—ฐ์Šต๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ํฌํ•จ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ํ‚ค์šฐ๋Š” ๋ฐ ํฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) Q: ๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค ๋ถ„์•ผ์—์„œ ํšจ๊ณผ์ ์ธ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?

๊ณ ๊ฐ ์„œ๋น„์Šค๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด "How can I assist you today?"์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ์œ ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ์ œ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "We can offer you a replacement."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณ ๊ฐ์˜ ๋ถˆ๋งŒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด "I’m sorry to hear that."๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋ฅผ ์Œ“๋Š” ๋ฐ ๋„์›€์ด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4) Q: A/S ์„œ๋น„์Šค๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์€ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ด ๋ธŒ๋žœ๋“œ๋Š” ์–ด๋””์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์˜์–ด ๊ต์œก ๋ถ„์•ผ์—์„œ A/S๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์€ ๋ธŒ๋žœ๋“œ๋กœ๋Š” "EF Education First"์™€ "Berlitz"๋ฅผ ์ถ”์ฒœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. EF๋Š” ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ๊ณผ ๊ฐ•์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด ๊ฐœ์ธ ๋งž์ถคํ˜• ๊ต์œก์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Berlitz๋Š” ์ „ ์„ธ๊ณ„์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์ •๋ฐ›๋Š” ๋ธŒ๋žœ๋“œ๋กœ, ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ปค๋ฆฌํ˜๋Ÿผ๊ณผ ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ฐ•์‚ฌ๋“ค์ด ํŠน์ง•์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

5) Q: ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ ์‹œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์ ์€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?

๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ์ž‘์„ฑ ์‹œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์ ์€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•จ๊ณผ ์ „๋ฌธ์„ฑ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "Dear [Name],"์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐœ์ธํ™”ํ•˜๊ณ , ๋ณธ๋ฌธ์—์„œ๋Š” "I am writing to..."์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋ชฉ์ ์„ ๋ถ„๋ช…ํžˆ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” "Best regards,"๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ์ ์ธ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด ๋ธ”๋กœ๊ทธ์˜ ์ธ๊ธฐ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ

๊ฐ์‹ค ์ฒญ์†Œ ์š”์ฒญ·๊ฑฐ์ ˆํ•  ๋•Œ ์“ฐ๋Š” ์‹ค์ œ ํ˜ธํ…” ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„ ์ •๋ฆฌ

์ง€๊ธˆ ๋†“์น˜๋ฉด ํ›„ํšŒํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋“€์˜ค๋ง๊ณ  ํ”„๋ฆฌ๋ฏธ์—„ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ ์ฒดํ—˜ํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”

๋งต๊ธฐ ์กฐ์ ˆ ์š”์ฒญ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งํ•˜์„ธ์š”